Bookmark this item
City Walk

City Walk

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 03/24/08 @754 | MakoShark003 | Comments critiques (8) | Views views (179)


City Walk
Do not copy, modify, distribute or sell the whole or parts of the image above without permission of the creator. More.
 

Description

Night Pciture no Tripod. :)
 
Vote statistics

Recent: 0 votes, 0 points

Total: 6 votes, 38 points

Cast your vote

You have to be logged in to vote

Voting? Read the faq

Options

None

Comments (8)

Bookmark this item
Member comments
Avatar HuseyinKARA

 03/24/08 @773

It is excellent really. The success tongue. I am congratulateing you. I am expecting you will succeed.
 
Avatar moserArtist

 03/24/08 @812

@HuseyinKARA: R u a robot? You just said the same on a previous post! LOL

...and the overexposure on the water surface is not working for me at least.
 
Avatar everseen

 03/24/08 @833

Great place! I thought this was a tilt-shift. lol:)
 
Avatar Millink

 03/24/08 @891

See the review section.
 
Avatar Phryneas

 03/24/08 @928

The centered composition works well here, but I have to agree with Millink - cropping top and bottom could be interesting. And I have to agree that the overexposure on the water is too strong - but except to that, it's a great photo.
I really like the mix of strong red, green and white lights.
 
Avatar MakoShark003

 03/25/08 @553

thanks everyone for the constructive comments :), i appreciate it a bunch. just starting to experiment with photography a month back.
 
Avatar purplerose

 03/25/08 @563

Too wide. Max width is 716 pixels on this site.
 
pgarnet05

 04/23/08 @907

great! my only comment is the water looks a little strange/ too bright
 
Bookmark this item
Comment




To write a comment you need to be logged in

If you're not a registered member, click here to sign up.




Reviews (1) beta

Bookmark this item
Review this artwork
Avatar Millink

 01/01/70 @409

Concept:

Average

Technical Skill:

Weak

Impact/impression:

Strong
Pros:
  • A good atmosphere (very peaceful and 'nightish')
  • Good colours (especially the green)
  • Good shutterspeed (bushes look very soft)
Cons:
  • Overexposure (very distracting, especially the lower part + the streetpoles)
  • Try a tighter crop on top and bottom (18x10 proportions)
  • Position (might wanna try a lower, or more centered position)
Overall opinion/feedback:
A good idea, the execution lacks quality. Simple things like exposure time can be corrected easily on your camera. Try to play around with the composition some more.
 
Bookmark this item
Write a review




To write a review you need to be logged in

If you're not a registered member, click here to sign up.




Search the site
SiteSearch

Web GFXartist.com

Other galleries
Browse all new artworks

 3D Modelling
 Drawing
 Painting
 Photo Manipulation
 Photography
        Abstract
        Architecture
        Figure
        Nature
        Self Portrait Contest
        Still life
        Technology
        Vehicle
        Uncategorized
 Design
Profile


GFXuser name:
   MakoShark003
Full Name:
  Logan
Gender:
  Male
Birthdate:
  02/26/1988 (20)
Country:
  United States
Member since:
  03/16/2006

Actions:

visit site Visit website
Other artworks of this artist
Words Words
comments comments(3)
Added on: 04/11 @814
Amount of Votes: 2
Total score: 13
Recent score: 0
Yellow Dinosaur Yellow Dinosaur
comments comments(7)
Added on: 04/03 @920
Amount of Votes: 8
Total score: 59
Recent score: 0
Reflect the Mood. Reflect the Mood.
comments comments(12)
Added on: 04/02 @564
Amount of Votes: 10
Total score: 77
Recent score: 0
Sponsored Links


Affiliates